A nice write-up of the Voltage Poetry site, which features poems with great turns in it–along with discussion of those turns–can be found here.
A nice write-up of the Voltage Poetry site, which features poems with great turns in it–along with discussion of those turns–can be found here.
All Turned Around
Dear Volta,
In the past few years,
you’ve become a huge
part of my life. I think about you
almost constantly these days,
and that absolutely terrifies me. For a
while after we met, I thought
you were trying to avoid me. I felt
like I was constantly searching
for you and had no idea
where to even begin.
Then I started to learn your ways,
and we grew close.
Maybe a little too close.
You started to show up
everywhere, even when I wasn’t
looking for you. Now it seems like
I can’t get away from you
anymore, and I think I really just
need some space.
It’s not that you’re not great,
I just don’t think I can
keep playing your games.
I feel like you’re just
spinning me in circles and
I’m not sure what you
want me to think. You invite
your friends over unannounced
when I think it’s just going
to be the two of us settling in
for a cozy night by the fire. You’ve just
become too unpredictable –
I never know what
you’re going to look like
the next time I see you,
and sometimes you just don’t
make any sense at all.
I’m trying my best to understand
you, but it’s like you just
keep sending me in different directions,
and I can’t take it anymore.
The thing is,
despite all that,
I still need.
I want you.
As much as I complain,
I still look for you constantly –
every time I open a book or go on
a computer, you’re there,
as patient with me as ever.
And when I don’t see you,
everything just seems so
predictable and boring. Every time
I think I just need to get away
from you for a while,
you show me
a brand new way of looking at things
and I remember why
you fascinate me.
You’ve always been there
when I needed you, and you
constantly give me
new things to look forward to.
Finding you
changed the way I see the world,
and I can’t imagine my life
without you anymore.
And, if I’m being honest,
I can’t get enough of your but.
Don’t ever change.
Love, Emily
–by Emily Susina
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Emily Susina is a senior at Illinois Wesleyan University, majoring in English (with a concentration in writing) and Greek and Roman Studies. She serves an assistant with Voltage Poetry, the online anthology of poems with great turns, and discussion of those poems, co-edited by Kim Addonizio and me. Clearly, the work is getting to her…!
Poet-critic Celia Lisset Alvarez has some very kind words to say about Structure & Surprise over at her blog, “Writing with Celia.” Among other things, Ms. Alvarez refers to the fact that Structure & Surprise was left off of the Poets & Writers “Best Books for Writers” list as a “glaring omission,” calling it a “dark horse favorite,” and stating that “[f]ull of examples, this book is not only a great read for the poet who is struggling to find ways to guide a poem to the final draft successfully, but also would make a great textbook….any advanced class that is studying poetry, whether creatively or critically, would find this book eye-opening.”
Phew… What can I say? Music to my ears.
Especially as this comes from a poet who knows how to engage a turn–just check out Ms. Alvarez’s poem “What It Takes to Be Lois Lane.”
Here is a terrific (and frightening) new elegy inspired by the discussion of the elegy in Structure & Surprise.
Thanks to D. A. Powell for such a fine essay on the elegy; to Patrick Phillips for such a lovely, haunting poem (here is a cool version of it); to Kim Addonizio for her support of the turn (at the retreat, and elsewhere, including teaming up with me to co-edit Voltage Poetry); and, last but not least, to Claudia Mills for her own new, strong poem.
–by Aaron Crippen
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Aaron Crippen is a poet and educator. He is the translator of Nameless Flowers: Selected Poems of Gu Cheng (George Braziller, 2005), a project for which he received an NEA Literature Fellowship, and for which he received a PEN Texas Literary Award for Poetry. His poems have appeared in numerous journals, including Verse and the Beloit Poetry Journal.
For more on emblem poems, click here.