In her entry in “Endless Structures” in Structure & Surprise: Engaging Poetic Turns, Rachel Zucker refers to three poems that turn to sudden revelation near their conclusion. Here are links to those poems:
“Archaic Torso of Apollo,” by Rainer Maria Rilke
Here is Mark Doty on Rilke’s great poem.
“Lying in a Hammock at William Duffy’s Farm in Pine Island, Minnesota,” by James Wright
Other poems that feature a sudden, final revelation include:
“The Purpose of Poetry,” by Jared Carter (from The Darkened Rooms of Summer: New and Selected Poems, p. 41)
“Mummy of a Lady Named Jemutesonekh,” by Thomas James
“Passengers,” by Denis Johnson
“The Rose,” by Jean Valentine
“The Impossible,” by Bruce Weigl
“Body as Argument,” by Jillian Weise (in The Amputee’s Guide to Sex (Soft Skull, 2007), p. 81).
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Terrance Hayes’s “American Sonnet for My Past and Future Assassin” (“Rilke ends his sonnet ‘Archaic Torso of Apollo’ saying”) offers an intriguing take on–and perhaps critique of–the epiphanic turn.
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